Our film is called Bibi and Tina, girl vs. boys. The film was released in 2016 and is 110 minutes long. It’s a comedy. You can watch the film from 0 years ago and the original language is German. The main characters are Bibi Blocksberg and Tina Martin, they are best friends. The students from a partner school visit the Falkenstein tent camp to get to know country life. The guest student Urs turns out to be an extreme macho and wisecrack. This makes him a big thorn in the side of Bibi and Tina. There is a big argument between the tow groups because Bibi found the last disturber of the game and Urs left her alone in the cave in the dark. In the end there is a forest fire but Bibi was able to put it out using her witch power. We recommend the film because it is exciting and adventurous.
Lucy Lorenz and Marie Götz
comedy, it is adventurous, witch power, tent camp, horses
Film
Its a pretty good Film review!
Good Job
You did everithing that you had to do for the task, other then adding the Trailer from the Movie.
You two put interesting facts about the movie into your Text and have your own oppinion on it and described the most importent characters.
You told us what the text is about, told us the topic and the tex had a pretty clear structure.
You already used a good amount of linking words but there could be more (so it would be a little easier to read). You used quite a lot of good and different adjectives, but your grammer wasn´t always completly correct.
Tipps:
When you wrote ,,0 years ago” It would mean it came out this year, but it didn´t so you should write ,,from … years ago” and you had a little spelling problem with the word two.
I woud recommend (thats just my oppinion) to not cramp the text togheter so much, it would be better if you clicked Enter after a sentence.
So in generall you should put a trailer in if you´re writing about a movie, or atleast a picture from the movie.
Use some more linking words like instead of ,,This” what you wrote after wisecrack you could write ,,wich”, what just makes ist a little better.
And dont forget the commas when you´re writing something!
Otherwise, its a okey-ish text. Not to bad not to good.
I really like what you wrote, because there is a lot of information about the film. This was really fun to read because you use funny words. You use “in the” very often for example “in the cave in the dark”
you can write there in the dark cave.
Hey,
you have covered the important points and an argument for your opinion. Additionally you discribed the characters. Never the less you can use more different adjectives. And more linking words.
Your text is very exciting!